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GothicCherry
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0 posted 2009-01-27 08:40 PM



The attire of a sinner,
and the smile of a winner,
grace in a seductive strut,
make-up beauty in a rut.

Fiery eyes just getting by,
the only way is with a sigh.
God's given angel features
help arouse the wealthy creatures.

Disliked transgressions
make up the work sessions.
Taking control of the soul,
sins spearing an empty hole.

Prayers raised to the Lord
to bring down his sword,
and slash away this guilty world.
She's sick of being twisted and twirled.

© Copyright 2009 Michaela J. McHone - All Rights Reserved
Marc-Andre
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1 posted 2009-01-27 09:07 PM


An interesting piece, I like those lines:

God's given angel features
help arouse the wealthy creatures.


Have a marvelous day! Mark

GothicCherry
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2 posted 2009-01-27 09:10 PM


Thanks Mark! Your comments mean alot.
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2009-01-27 11:51 PM


"The attire of a sinner,
and the smile of a winner,
grace in a seductive strut,
make-up beauty in a rut."

~ I get the picture! lol You painted her very well! I was intrigued at the get-go!


EA

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