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Open Poetry #44

Wrong Place, Right Time

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2009-01-27 07:09 PM

Wrong place, But Right Time

I am in love
But I am not sure
If I am in right place
I am not sure
If I am ready
If I am ready
For loving you
If I am right one
to love you
Rain reminded me
of where am I?
Looking out the window
Seeing a rainbow
Where the rain is still
coming down on earth
Seeing the rain
Seeing the pain
I smiled at myself
Where am I?
Am I here at wrong place
To love you
Am I in the right place
to love you
I am not sure
If I am ready to see this love
In wrong place
But I am here in right to fall
for you
I am in right time
But wrong place

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2009-01-27 07:15 PM

Why does love have to be so complicated?
Ida

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-01-27 07:20 PM

Yo dear Vandana,

This is an interesting poem. Nice work.

Love Bobby

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