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Run Away / Till Death do us Part
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Run Away / Till Death do us Part |
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vertiqual New Member
since 2009-01-27
Posts 1 |
Just wrote these 1 night in December, never wrote a poem before these  The love i know for you has no bounds. Like everyone we'll have out ups and downs But the world will not bother me. The screaming will not frighten me. Just seeing you sat upon the warm fire Just sitting..staring The warm fire engulfing the rooms as i step up behind you I hug you softly and say "I love you" You turn around and hug me back Our bodies feel warm to the touch Your arms draped around my neck Mine around yours The world is not there anymore Just you..and me. I hold you tight, safe from the dangers. I ask you.."Run off with me..?" "Run Away" ----------------------------------------------- The world does not revolve when your around me It may deafen me but i can still hear The sweet sweet voice calling me of near. I look around and i see an angel The sweet angelic voice swings out to me. Do you..Love me? I turn quickly and run, run to the voice With a silent whisper i say those two words..I do. Our arms grasp one another Our faces lock together firmly You keep whispering, i..love you to. I take away my face and look into your eyes.. "Stay together, forever and ever more" Your face startled with love I look deep into your eyes once more Those waterfall-like eyes just gushing love I say my last words.. "Till I Die" "Till Death Do Us Part" I welcome any criticism as i am not a poetic person, Hope you enjoyed my poems if anything |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Welcome to PIP, Vertiqual. I enjoyed the read. All I can say is that I hope you will keep writing poetry. Take some time to learn the craft, and let your own voice speak Mark |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, vertiqual! Welcome aboard the pip ship! If these two poems are your first attempts at writing poetry, then you are definitely blessed with natural talent!  May that talent blossom and grow on these blue pages! There are many fine poets on this site that I have learned a great deal from by reading their poems! Enjoy your journey here! I am still learning and hopefully growing after my 6 1/2 years here! Giving you a warm, welcomimg pip hug, Earth Angel  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Welcome to PIP! *S* And you're off to a good start... I enjoyed these! |
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