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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-01-25 09:33 PM




I watch in the mirror
where you view
me with longing
by the halls
of the parlor

we dance
to the rhythms
of salsa
to cha cha

your eyes rhyme
latino, brown
chariot flyers,
that ride me
in tango, my
stilletos on fire

and your smile
is contagious
making mush
of my steel side

it moves me to gyrate
but I won't let you go there

I heard of that gutter
where the tangled hearts
mingle

and heat sheets
on the highways,
gold rings tossed
on the nightstand
  
So lets muse
in the shadows
in the silhouette
sambas

of dreamspeak
and niceties
cordial and conventional

for now, while you court me
let's simmer, a slowdance
where we blush /touch
by happenstance

before we go wilding
in the heat of merengue
through the tunnels of naughty


[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-26-2009 05:27 PM).]

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Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2009-01-25 10:24 PM


inkedgoddess - whew, anytime...

BC

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2009-01-25 10:27 PM


Yo dear Inkedgoddess,

I liked this a lot.  I'm ready.

Love Bobby

Richy
Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

3 posted 2009-01-25 11:02 PM



Now thats what I call a foxy trot!

If only I had a partner for my
naughty bossa nova.

Oh by the way… how long does one’s
fandango have to simmer before it can couple
with one’s pachenga?

Michele that was one delicious salsa!
Richy



1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
4 posted 2009-01-25 11:41 PM


i love ALL of your dancing poetry

i wish you went every night !!!!

steavenr
Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

5 posted 2009-01-26 12:01 PM


"blush /touch
by happenstance"

...interesting conveyance to fantasy...'sizzle' is the most appropriate word I can think of

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
6 posted 2009-01-26 02:39 AM


Goddess, I sense a delectable Pas de Deux in the offing.

You sure know how to put the sass in the salsa!


Linda

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2009-01-26 11:19 AM


Now this Mzzz.InkedGoddess is beyound spicey! ~ It's putting the big captial 'R' in Romantic...
A beauitfully penned piece of art my poet friend.


ARCTIC WIND

Midnitesun
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Gaia
8 posted 2009-01-26 11:23 AM


"I heard of that gutter
where the tangled hearts
mingle"
Nice!

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