There's a Pin In My Thorax.

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Open Poetry #44

There's a Pin In My Thorax.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-01-25 03:38 PM

How can you
keep me pinned
so perfectly,
your collected insect
beneath the clearest glass.
Dehydrated,
that I may last as long
as you decide to keep me.

How can you
be such a sweet captor?
Quite simple words
become so attractive,
when they flutter
from your perfect mouth.

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The Sadie Series.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

[This message has been edited by viking_metal (01-25-2009 10:57 PM).]

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-01-25 04:43 PM

Yo Paul,

This is a clever write. That's Sadie for you.

Bobby

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

2 posted 2009-01-25 06:00 PM

Your entomological poem is a crafted wonder. Enjoyed! but you should be freed...

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

3 posted 2009-01-25 09:01 PM

I'm under the glass, more by my choice than I like to admit. She's a great gal, she's just got a different life to live.

But to a degree- that's Sadie for you.

Thanks to you both, I wasn't as pleased with it as you seem to be!

-P

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2009-01-25 09:15 PM

She's quite a weaver that Sadie, you can only surrender

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

5 posted 2009-01-25 09:25 PM

"Quite simple words
become so attractive,"

Loved this bit....

Nice poem. Enjoyed the insect reference.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

6 posted 2009-01-25 10:59 PM

IG- Agreed... She's ridiculously beautiful to boot...

GC- Thanks, mademoiselle.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Boshii2
Member

since 2009-02-01

Posts 146

7 posted 2009-02-03 08:02 PM

bugger

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

8 posted 2009-02-04 12:31 PM

Haha, thanks for the sympathy, Boshii!

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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