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Open Poetry #44
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2islander2
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by the sea
0 posted 2009-01-25 10:24 AM


Wounded.
The sun collapses
in the bloodstained
sea.

Blessé.
le soleil ensanglante
la mer.
© Copyright 2009 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-01-25 07:31 PM

Yann,

This is a cute little poem.

Bobby
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2009-01-26 01:01 AM

Yann... I loved your sunsets 1, 2 & 3 ... very well down my friend.... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2009-01-26 11:18 AM

Red sunsets are mesmerizing!
WindWalker11
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4 posted 2009-02-01 07:49 PM

I really like this one.
Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2009-02-03 04:37 AM

Powerful image, dear Yann. The interpretation depends certainly on your mood.

Love,
Margherita
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