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A Danicing Marionette
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A Danicing Marionette |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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 A Dancing Marionette Sweeping me off my feet To a dance of seduction Allured and enticed By a loving introduction On those magical nights As I danced to the tune Easily I surrendered Gazing stars and moon Captured in those hands Ever flexible and pliable A puppet on strings With every move reliable Charmed and captivated In being to blind to see A dancing marionette Was what you made me Hope ©2009 |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
I enjoyed your poem very much. Love makes dancing marionettes of us all. On the seashore I espy the dreadful void under the tides |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love how your adding photos with your lovely poems now Hope! ~ A beautyyyy   ARCTIC WIND |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Whether its pushing buttons or pulling strings, were all puppets to some people aren't we. Hey I do a mean sock puppet! This was great Hope! Richy |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
HopeS - This was crafted with the deft hand of a poet. Amazing how the strings of Love control are thinking, our heartbeats and our movements. We'd love to cut them sometimes but we fear losing them forever and thus resign ourselves to the fate of a dancing marionette. This was a gem and I loved it HopeS. Namyh |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
lovely write...but wherever did you find such an appropriate pic? amazing |
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