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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-01-24 07:50 PM



I wonder sometimes now
if you look up at the palms
and wonder about mine
pressed to your waist slow gowned
perhaps just a dance of souls

wordless and I would imagine
they would get in the way too
like the whisper of shimmer did
when the sun touched your breasts
and they stole your eyes from mine

as only momentarily they rested
sigh slipped onto heavenly
like a micro wave mona lisa
seducing what I had forgotten
from the dream times I searched for

would our songs ever be long enough
just to be something friendly
that never was blessed by a god
that tip toe hesitation that lingers
I promise too, I would never tell you

if I was more than just a window's statue


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daark  (circle of palms)

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steavenr
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1 posted 2009-01-24 11:25 PM


whew....sizzle...

"whisper of shimmer":

...cool phrase (breathing deeply)

Indigo
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2 posted 2009-01-25 03:40 AM


dancing on tip toe
wearing lisa's smile, your palms
sway my dreams at night.

Indigo

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2009-01-25 04:16 AM


^sigh^ just lovely Mr Daark..   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2009-01-25 07:29 AM


steavenr..thanks amigo!!


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ms indi...(pouting) only at night...how do I attain 24 6?  (gave you room for your gods..)**


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ms r&b, thanks lady friend

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2009-01-25 09:18 AM


i love the mystery and your length of lovely

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2009-01-25 10:43 AM


Lovely, lovely, Lovely!


ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2009-01-25 02:12 PM


ms inky...you are always a warm wet smile place...thanks babe


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thank you AW,,,thank you much

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8 posted 2009-02-08 11:29 AM


D

This almost hurts to read.  The words are beautiful and make my inner parts long - for more - to read more and feel more.

A

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2009-02-08 01:27 PM


ms ali-san...perhaps it is lumpy oatmeal?  thanks babe
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