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Anniepimm
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0 posted 2009-01-24 05:43 PM



A Flowers Dawn

One lonely flower awaits the dawn
In a field so bare of light
Awaits the sun to give it life
In the cold dark of the night,

Icy winds that coldly blow
The air is crisp and new
The dawn brings the bird song
To awaken the morning for you,

As the light of the day is dawning
The lonely flower comes anew
Each petal opens slowly
To catch the fresh morning dew,

And as the flower opens fully
With the warmth of the sun on it's face
Others begin to awake
And fill natures empty space

Annie,

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Artic Wind
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1 posted 2009-01-24 05:44 PM


This is so nice, I believe we haven't met yet!
Hello!


ARCTIC WIND

2islander2
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2 posted 2009-01-24 05:47 PM


very enjoyable read.  Thanks

yann

Anniepimm
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3 posted 2009-01-24 05:50 PM


Thank you Arctic wind and hello

And thank you yann

Both your comments were lovely

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4 posted 2009-01-26 02:28 PM


I like this! *S* One glimmer of hope can make such a difference! *S*
Anniepimm
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5 posted 2009-01-26 02:56 PM


Yes it can and fortunately it keeps happening
Sharon Rose
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6 posted 2009-01-26 07:47 PM


Lovely poem, I enjoy reading your poetry.
Anniepimm
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7 posted 2009-01-26 07:56 PM


Thank you Sharon Rose thats nice of you
inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2009-01-26 08:49 PM


like an unfolding of the soul from being clenched in darkness
this is lovely

ethome
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9 posted 2009-01-27 02:31 AM


Very nice enjoyable soothing read.....

Eric

Anniepimm
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10 posted 2009-01-27 04:03 AM


Thank you thats lovely
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