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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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A temporal christening on willows at windows, the rows of the gifted wrapped in icicle folly the launching of clouds and the crackling of sky faced extremities as they break from their branches in mangled magentas as the wounded of winter, in verticle image limp along on the crosswinds [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-26-2009 08:53 AM).] |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I am a bit lost in this - but what a beautiful place to be lost in, Inkd! Owl |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
To me it depicts a winter scene as branches freeze and fall Delicate and lovely imagery. Thanks for sharing. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh my... I got lost in it too, but in a lovely way--I had this total visual of a weeping willow iced over... wow and m'goddess yer beautiful  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Found it. It was the very first picture too.  Thanks again, lovely. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Such beauty through your eyes Michele. How lucky we are, to have but a glimpse.  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"the rows of the gifted wrapped in icicle folly" ...wow...and there are so many good lines in this!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lovely movement through the words in this piece........Most enjoyable. Eric |
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turtle Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548Harbor |
Hello inkedgoddess I'm new here abouts. Beings you look as though you've been here awhile and I liked this poem. I'd like to comment. If I may? I had to read this through a couple times to absorb it, but was intrigued enough to do so. This being a "temporal" interprtation of perhaps, a tree from ones window, captures the scene. Not only in description, but mood as well. Nicely done! Turtle |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michele - deep thoughts I read in this writing. BC |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for stopping by and serene one that picture is just exactly what i see out here. thank you for finding it for the pipsters |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Michele~ This is one beautiful poem you have written here... Excellent!  ARCTIC WIND |
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