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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea

0 posted 2009-01-24 05:16 AM


Let me enter in your suspended garden,
pick up the flowers of the unstained soul,
drink the dew of rising lights, the lazyness
of the absence melt with the beauty of
gardenias. Let me walk in the alleys of
sagittarian kindness, share memories
of the drifting schools on the other blank
of wooded hills, let me see the rainbow of roses,
of bridges of heart, dream above the quiet
urban canopy, let me enter in your garden,
tasting safe ignorances and faraway fruits,
by chance from the travels of your hands.

[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (01-24-2009 08:29 AM).]

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Marc-Andre
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since 2008-12-07
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1 posted 2009-01-24 08:04 AM


Sounds wonderful; please tell them to let me in too Mark
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2009-01-24 11:56 PM


2islander2 - my garden is open...

BC

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2009-01-26 07:56 PM


Sounds like a beautiful garden, yann.
                                  Ida

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2009-01-26 08:03 PM


This is a delightful garden you've shared.
Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
5 posted 2009-02-05 02:03 AM


yann,

Lovely.

Alison

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
6 posted 2009-02-05 06:05 PM


Delightful, dear Yann!
Very romantic.

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
7 posted 2009-02-05 08:32 PM


Yo Yann,

You know you're welcome here in the hood anytime.  All our flowers are human here, we're beautiful.

Bobby

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