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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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Your kisses curl my toes Your touch addles my brain And if you dare stop now I’ll go raving insane! I just don’t understand All these funny feelings Or just how you can set My senses cartwheeling These scorch marks on my skin Remind me I’ve been burned But a mere taste of you Erases all I’ve learned I should be quelled by fears, Cowering and quaking Instead of confident You can ease this aching I’ve all these fantasies And know that you’ll appease Your kisses curl my toes Your touch buckles my knees |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Been there...felt that...  Enjoyed, Ruth! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Belle, you touches and kisses do the same thing to me! lol ~ Sorry, Suthern One, I couldn't resist! Gosh, I could do with a dose or two of toe- curling kisses and knee-bending touches, myself, right about now!  May your dreams become your reality! You're off to a good start by writing down what you would like!   Linda Lou |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You know this starts out like the lyrics to a Chuck Berry song and I could hear it rockin. Love the flow and the musical images are great! Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice romantic writing...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"But a mere taste of you Erases all I’ve learned" sighing, crying and laughing too. I can't believe them that say they want in my pants, considering even medical folk must knock me out--it's a fairly dangerous trek. Love you much, lady, and I see I have company....  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
......and you? And how! Wow! The heat in this one is palpable, and I like the way you hold that almost-but-not-quite-innocent tone, while revealing all..... Yes -- beautifully done. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Burk28 Member
since 2009-01-08
Posts 80Michigan USA |
a wonderful serenade. bravo Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Suthern, you've got me searching for elf shoes now, since your words curled my own toes! Lucky, my brain was already rattled. I really enjoyed this, dear poetess! Richy  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very captivating! Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nice toe-curl jamming tune! Sensuous poetry, Suthern.  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
suthern - love the tone of this write... BC |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
HOT stuff missy love it !!! |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I like the form you wrote this in |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Suthern, This has excllent end rhymes. Well done. Bobby |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sunshine: I'm glad, I'm glad... and I'm glad! *S* Thank you! EA: I'll just call you irresistable. *smirk* But oh, wait! You really are! *G* Thank you, dear friend... those smiles are most appreciated. *S* And yes... memories are most grand, but I wouldn't mind a refresher course! LOL ethome: And if the house is a'rockin', you have ME thinking Stevie Ray and Double Trouble! *S* And that makes my afternoon.... Thank you very much! JM: Thank you so very much. *S* serenity: Yes'm. *G* Hormones and common sense don't seem to reside well together. *G* LOL'ing at dangerous trek... thank you so much! Ratleader: LOL... Moi?? *S* You mean that shirt was see-through??? Oh, dear! *S* Thank you so much... I'm glad you liked the warmth! *S* Burk: Thank you very much! *S* I appreciate that bravo! *S* Richy: You sweet lil curly-toed, rattle-brained thing... mmmm-wah!!! *S* Thank you so very much!! Margherita: Now if only I could hold those sensations captive! LOL Thank you!! Midnitesun: Thank you so much, sweet lady... glad you enjoyed! *S* BC: Thank you very much, kind sir! *S* slick: But I think I need more practice... don't you? *G* Thank you so very much!!! GC: Thank you very much! *S* Bobby: I'm glad you like... thank you! *S* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hey suthern, tantalising poem. It made me gasp and lick my lips in anticipation. Keth Always do more than is required of you George Patton |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yeah I love that Stevie Ray "In Step" album.....Real killer stuff. Eric |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
You know, there was a time, when I had these same feelings. It's a wonderful feeling to have. |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
Ruth, words with the splendor of the first morning sun telling you it's time to feel the warmth of something new and something old. Jeff |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Keth: And your response made me grin... thank you! *S* ethome: Thank you for the return visit! *S* And you're right... I don't know how I'd endure long drives without SRV. *S* Rose: They are indeed wonderful... whether in present time or memory. *S* Thank you! Jeff: I love your response... thank you so very much! *S* |
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