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gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
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0 posted 2009-01-21 11:07 PM



Can I be that some one special
I want to make you free
You won’t be around
I figured that out
I wish it wasn’t so hard
The days that I wish would pass
Are gone away
I wish my dream was real
Now I feel like I have to stay

Why do I feel this way?
Everything I wished for is gone
Everything I wanted has went away
The heart I had has lost its heat

I want to help you with anything
I would do everything
Just to keep you around me
I would make you smile
No matter how close to death
I would keep you in a happy grace

You’re my cool summer breeze
You’re everything to me
Even though you don’t know that
I want to find if you’re real

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Anniepimm
Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
1 posted 2009-01-24 05:46 PM


Delicate and lovely imagery.
Looking for the right type of love isn't easy
Thanks for sharing.

Juju
Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
2 posted 2009-01-25 10:27 PM


So sweat

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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