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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
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England

0 posted 2009-01-21 09:02 AM



The Fisherman

Casting the line over glass like waters
Float coming to rest on the unseen bond of air
The lure of the insect so irresistible
we watch with a fisherman's stare,

Hour upon hour sitting and staring into space
Umbrella positioned strategically over head
The rain mercilessly poring onto the water
Soaks the fisherman he wonders why he is not in bed,

The line moves; slowly jerking
Then more as the fish takes a bite
The fisherman takes a strong hold
He is ready for the fight,

The spool whizzes round and round
Faster And faster as it spins and takes it's toll
The fisherman holds; and pulls in the line
As the fish really takes control,

At last the fisherman lands him
A ten pound-er really, "for sure"
His buddies in the pub do believe him
As his tiddler flounders on the shore,

Annie,
19-8-2008

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HopeS
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Perth Western Australia
1 posted 2009-01-21 09:40 AM


Yes those tales of the fishermen , the catch they say is bigger then it really is , my son tells me of the huge one that got away LOL


Hope

Anniepimm
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England
2 posted 2009-01-21 09:48 AM


Ha!Ha! you as well, my son in law used to do the same...
Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
3 posted 2009-01-21 10:12 AM


Yo dear Annie,

This is a nice poem.  What is a "tiddler"?  I'm a city person, I don't know such things.

Love Bobby

Anniepimm
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4 posted 2009-01-21 10:17 AM


Thanks Bobby A tiddler is a very small fish
Some call them sticklebacks, as they have a ridge of spikes on there backs..

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2009-01-22 06:25 PM


Fine writing...James
Anniepimm
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6 posted 2009-01-23 02:05 AM


Thank you James
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