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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
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0 posted 2009-01-20 07:31 PM



Surrender

I saw the light but refused it
I was offered a place by "God's" side
It would of been so Easy
If I had just surrender and died,

The light was so inviting
The warmth of the glow hard to resist
All i had to do was surrender
But again I decided to resist,

A soothing voice started to call to me
This way! its easy you will see
All you have to do is let go
And bring yourself to me,

Again I heard in the distance
Do it again this time do it right
Clear the command was spoken,
I was dragged back away from the light

Thank god I heard a voice say
Thank god she is back from the dead
Your going to be alright now
Your staying with us instead,

Annie..13-7-2008

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