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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2009-01-19 04:59 PM


Bones has learned
that none
of the phony creeps
that he calls “friends”
really give a rat’s behind
for his welfare.  

They want his body,
and that’s as far as it goes.

(Bones thanks God
for his good strong body.)  

Mom cares a little bit,
as long as he brings in
some money.  

Yeah,
Bones cares about Bones,
and that’s as far as it goes.

When it comes right down to it,
Bones needs Bones.  

Bobby

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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2009-01-19 06:54 PM


Bobby - Bones needs new friends, ones that are loyal and not deceiving. A good friend will never do this... Of course they are few and far between...

BC

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2009-01-19 06:58 PM


Thanks Bill,

You are right.  Bones did get real friends, a little later in life.

Bobby

steavenr
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3 posted 2009-01-19 10:48 PM


glad to hear that Bones was blessed with real friendship later on...just sorry for the journey he had to make...poignant, gut-wrenching write
Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2009-01-20 08:25 AM


Thanks Steavenr,

Yes, Bones has some very good friends.  He good that way.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Bobby

Yousha.S
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5 posted 2009-01-21 08:11 AM


Bobby:
Bones needs a new and a good friends,And we all care 4 bones.......

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2009-01-21 10:08 AM


Thanks dear Yousha.S,

Yes, Bones can always use new and good friends.

Bones cares about everyone, he's that way.

Love Bobby

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2009-01-21 11:07 AM


There's a difference between friends and users. I am glad Bones found some true friends.
                          Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2009-01-21 12:45 PM


Thanks dear Ida,

Yes, there is a vast difference between users and friends.

Somehow I think the nations "Bones" now have a real friend in the White House.

Yes, I know they do.

Love Bobby

sarah 45
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since 2008-12-19
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9 posted 2009-01-23 01:29 PM


I'm so happy that bones have friends now, but I'll tell you what even though bones have them now and even though I'm only 16 I'll be more than honored to be bones's friend

lol

T.c

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2009-01-23 01:35 PM


Yes, Bones has a strong body, but his mind is strong as well. A lesser man/boy would have crumbled.


Linda

Robert E. Jordan
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11 posted 2009-01-23 01:50 PM


Thanks Dear Sarah 45,

Bones say he'd love to be your friend.  You are now Bones buddy.

Thanks for the kind thoughts on Bones.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2009-01-23 01:52 PM


Thanks dear Linda,

Bones is more than happy for your confidence in him.

Love from Bones and Bobby

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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13 posted 2009-01-23 03:22 PM


Sadly it's true but where would Bones be without Bones to look after himself in this graceless old world.

Sometimes ya gotta be tough in the head to survive.

Eric

Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2009-01-23 03:46 PM


Thanks Eric,

It's everyones resonsibility to look after their own welfare.  That's the way it's always been.  I think you can find that in the tomes of all worlds religions--somewhere.

Bobby

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