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Morning Kiss
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Morning Kiss |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA 
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Eyes begin to adjust Relationships renew A memorable gift of dreams lingers in the back of my mind Arms wrapped tight around me Peacelful soft breath Inspiring love upon my skin Feels like nothing, that has been Small slit in the curtains allows a beam to protrude an observation of sunlight warms our exposed playfield A yawn, a stretch, a sigh A gaze into each others eyes Needing the softness, of each others lips Theres nothing like, A morning kiss |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Yep, wonderful indeed is a morning kiss! I like the imagery of the third stanza. I'm working on incorporating the five senses in my writings lately, and one I've really been struggling with is light (for sight). Somehow, not only I wouldn't come up with anything, I've had a hard time finding effective/touching examples. You've just provided me with an excellent one. Thank you!  Mark |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
You are so right so I'll bump this up for others to think/dream of a morning kiss. Enjoyed! Helen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
sim0riah - a morning kiss to start a new day, isn't it great... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is nice...and such a lovely flow in phrases like this: "A yawn, a stretch, a sigh A gaze into each others eyes" ...so pleasant |
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