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Heart Shots
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since 2009-01-16
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0 posted 2009-01-16 11:36 AM



It was our first date on halloween,
to see ghosts, goblins, and scary things.
You held my hand and I squeezed you tight,
hoping you'd keep me safe that night.

We talked and laughed the whole night through,
and I just couldn't take my eyes off you.
I knew right away that it was meant to be,
just me and you... and you and me.

We have something special that is rare and true,
and you made it all possible by just being you.
As we walk through life's journey hand in hand,
right by your side is where I will stand.

From the very begining you had my whole heart,
there is no finish line only the start.
I love you's are said day and night,
and heart to heart it shows us light.

Your in my dreams and thoughts each day,
and in your arms is where I'll stay.
Show me forever with love strong and true,
Yes Den, forever, is how long I'll love you.
  

© Copyright 2009 Heart Shots - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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1 posted 2009-01-16 11:45 AM


This poem of love is absolutely precious!!!!

~ and it reads so lyrically!

"From the very begining you had my whole heart,
there is no finish line only the start"

~ Big smiley face for those lines!!!

This is a fine debuting poem!

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

Earth Angel



HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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2 posted 2009-01-16 12:00 PM


Love and togetherness beautifully expressed

Hope

Sunshine
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3 posted 2009-01-16 12:12 PM


Welcome to Passions in Poetry!

Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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with you
4 posted 2009-01-16 12:37 PM


"We have something special that is rare and true,
and you made it all possible by just being you.
As we walk through life's journey hand in hand,
right by your side is where I will stand"

wonderful first post

Welcome to Pip!

Heart Shots
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since 2009-01-16
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5 posted 2009-01-16 12:46 PM


EA, Hope, Sunshine, and SEA, Thank each of you for your kind words and welcoming me into your circle of friends. It seems like a real nice place to be. Think I may pull up a chair and stay for a while. Thank you all again!
Marc-Andre
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6 posted 2009-01-16 12:49 PM


Heart Shots, that's one fine piece or writing I've found the first two stanzas especially effective, they brought back lots of memories. Mark
sarah 45
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since 2008-12-19
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7 posted 2009-01-16 01:08 PM


Such a beautiful honest feelings expressed in the cutest way
nice

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
8 posted 2009-01-17 10:29 PM


this is such a lovely poem!

Welcome to our pages blue.. I hope you read more of your beautiful work...

  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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