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Open Poetry #44

The Moonlights Edge

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

0 posted 2009-01-16 06:56 AM

The Moonlight’s Edge

I walk along the the moonlight’s edge, of my reason
Of the world I have come to know, as my nightmare
I run as fast as I can but I always get caught
why is there no escaping the torment?
have I not given my all
my mind drifts to the moonlight’s edge and i have to recoil,

Wont someone take me out of my nightmare?
Must I be forever in this void?
I am lost in the darkness of the my shadow
And my voice dies as with the setting of the sun,

The moonlight filters into my dreams
I am part of the darkness it brings
Only once in the four times it changes
Dose the light bring sweet relief,

And yet! I pray for the darkness of the night
For the shadow of my soul to emerge
The moonlight burns and sizzles my skin
As the daylight hovers on the verge,

Please leave me to walk in the moonlight
Give me the hour of my death
I know that soon I will be forgotten
Just a ghost on the moonlights edge.

Annie,
16-09-2008

sarah 45
Member

since 2008-12-19

Posts 54

1 posted 2009-01-16 07:06 AM

That's so beutiful and well written, I really liked the part:

Please leave me to walk in the moonlight
Give me the hour of my death
I know that soon I will be forgotten
Just a ghost on the moonlights edge.

But just for the record, some1 like U can't be forgotten.... T.C

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

2 posted 2009-01-16 07:09 AM

Awwww thank you TC that's so sweet of you,
I am glad you liked my poem

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