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Yousha.S Junior Member
since 2009-01-16
Posts 10 |
Well I'm only 12 & this's my 1st one I hope you'll like it... fear,blood killing, stop it must stop ! Down Down freedom's enemies think about souls think about your end fear your God fear your future killing must stop stop , stop , please , stop everywhere everyday blood .... blood noone can care noone can find a way ...... [This message has been edited by Yousha.S (01-16-2009 09:22 AM).] |
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sarah 45 Member
since 2008-12-19
Posts 54 |
hey honey, I'm so glad you finally got to post something in here, keep it up..... UR sister |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
welcome to Pip!  12 huh? this is great I hope to see you posting more, and there is a teen forum that you might enjoy here too *please check your email for a special greeting |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"killing must stop stop , stop , please , stop" "Amen" to that!!! Hi, welcome to piptalk! I can feel the passion in your plea. Powerful write! ~ and you're only 12, you say? Wow! Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Love, Harmony, and Peace, Earth Angel  |
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Yousha.S Junior Member
since 2009-01-16
Posts 10 |
Thanks (SEA), appreciate it alot, I'm hoping to get better in time, thanks for the greeting card it's so cool and, yeh ok I'll check the teen forum Again thanks... |
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Yousha.S Junior Member
since 2009-01-16
Posts 10 |
ThanQ Earth angel for taking the time to read this. By the way I liked your name ( Earth angel) Yousha |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, Yousha, you are SO right! It must stop! If each person REFUSES to kill, nobody will be killing. Then each person just needs to stop hurting other people's feelings. There will still be hurting, but a lot, lot less. Welcome to Pip - and KEEP READING AND WRITING. Your life will enrichen in leaps and bounds as you do. Owl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yousha, Welcome to Passions in Poetry! A strong poem...a good heart. Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Yousha.S Junior Member
since 2009-01-16
Posts 10 |
Owl & sunshine, thank you both 4 reading my poem & commenting on it in such a nice way. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I don't think that I was thinking this deeply at 12 -- my prayer is that you are NOT writing from firsthand experience -- it is an excellent portrayal of the messy confusion of your topic--good job, indeed. Welcome to PiP...looking forward to more... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Yousha... welcome to our pages blue... I enjoyed your first post with us and will look for more of your work.. such a great talent at such a young age.. well done my lovely friend.. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Yousha.S Junior Member
since 2009-01-16
Posts 10 |
Steave, thanks alot 4 your comment and beautiful words, Thank GOD, no it's not from a personal experience but in anyway you see alot of what's going on everyday on the news, so... thanks again |
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Yousha.S Junior Member
since 2009-01-16
Posts 10 |
Roniece D.B, thanks 4 the fine words you said and 4 taking the time to read it. |
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