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2810 Callback
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2810 Callback |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
2810 Callback Ah, its Thursday. Thursday is always a sweet delight. Yet, I find myself wondering... Who was she with on Tuesday and Wednesday nites. Was it a fireman, an electrician, a maintenance man or, was it Major, Wilson, Bobe, Bass or Stan? It makes no difference who was first or last When Thursday comes she is Friday's past. Now, its my phone thats ringing off the wall as I anxiously await Thursday's call. I pickup and say, "Hello"...to which she responds, "This is twenty-eight ten...still on for tonite?" |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Interesting write Gives the idea of anticipation and wonder, Well penned |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Aha! Having read your preceding "2810" penning, it would appear that there has been a reversal of fortune, so to speak!  Now "When Thursday comes she is (your) Friday's past." lol  EA |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
thank you annie for the response and yes, angel, thursday, aka 2810... "a queen of the nite" has once again become, my, friday's past! |
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sarah 45 Member
since 2008-12-19
Posts 54 |
Again I say beautiful work and even more interesting than the 1st one ......and I hope 2 get to read yet more of your poems. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Though for two thirds of the poem you were dwelling in thoughts of jealousy, you did enjoy your own time with her and I can feel now the smile of joy that you carried on Friday! Very lovely! Love, Margherita  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It was the electrician in the parlour under the petticoats......Check it out! I enjoyed this very much....Sorry to stray from your story but the devil made me do it.....You're a very passionate talented writer. Eric |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
sarah, thank you for the positive response and i hope to read more of your poetry, too. |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
margherita, jealousy...you think so...i've never considered myself as a jealous person. i saw myself as a concerned person interested in her well being but i appreciate your perspective. i'll think about that. |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
eric, enjoyed your response...i understand... the devil makes me do things, too...and find i truly enjoy them at the time...thank god for forgiveness...for sometimes i am a very bad boy. ps... the electrician's name is larry and i shared the same thought...i believe it was larry ...but he is a good devil. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
r v wooo - this is different and I enjoyed reading this write... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
bc and vandana thank you for stopping by and taking the time to read and comment...both are appreciated. |
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