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Open Poetry #44

Janus Eve

secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2009-01-15 05:40 PM

            Janus Eve

In the footsteps of a
pallid, bitter sunset,
Winter’s tentative twilight
seeks brief council with the
   vagabond wind…
(to query the true nature
    of things)
for there is nowhere
it has never been.

            --- b. e. adams (1/15/2009)

SEA

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1 posted 2009-01-15 05:56 PM

that was wicked good

Margherita
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2 posted 2009-01-15 06:01 PM

Love the personification in this, dear Bruce. Very beautiful in your usual melancholic ways.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

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So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2009-01-15 09:28 PM

The wind must have plenty to say these days Bruce. Fine poem as usual.
Ida

Alison

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4 posted 2009-02-05 01:38 AM

Bruce,

I think you have been looking at my sun in January. It's so much more full of life already and is gearing up for full beauty in March. This is a beautiful poem.

A

gilead
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since 2008-03-10

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5 posted 2009-02-05 10:33 AM

Another jewel of crystalline clarity; I love the council of winter and wind!

art

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2009-02-05 10:43 AM

Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

This makes for a good poem.

However, winds are fairly short lived, and they don't really get around much, in the grand earthly scheme of things.

Bobby

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