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The Curse Of Being Born Different
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The Curse Of Being Born Different |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England 
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The Curse Of Being Born Different The feeling of loneliness I must contend the knowing that the stares are those of despise Every bite is scrutinized by disapproving eyes making me feel guilty for eating to stay alive, They look upon me as an outcast a freak to make fun of when ever they like They don't see the hurt in my eyes saying I should only be let out at night I am no different than the next person I have feelings the same as you Just because I am different doesn't mean I don't want love to, If only I was skinny and all my clothes fitted me skin tight I would sway down the high street instead of waiting for the dead of night Persecuted because I was born different a few extra pounds here and there I know what people are thinking she's eating in public! How dose she dare? Annie, 21-8-2008 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The feeling of inadequateness certainly is conveyed powerfully in your message, but "different" is beautiful ... Whoever this is about, I too have those extra pounds, come let's go out together in full sunshine and have fun, enjoying ourselves just the way we are ... let's transform what you call curse into a blessing. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Anniepimm, Don't worry about those extra pounds. Being skinny has it's drawback, and it can cause you a lot of misery. Skinny Bobby |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Margherita unfortunately the poem is about me, I am one of those obese people that others seem to think that throwing abuse at doesn't matter or hurt,  And bobby i wish i was thin then i would be able to go out and help others. Thank you both for your lovely feedback.. Annie |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
From what I've been hearing lately you are not all that "different." |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
annie, the body is only a shell...in your case, a shell holding beautiful mind. i love the feeling expressed in your poem. |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Awwww thank you both that's lovely of you |
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sarah 45 Member
since 2008-12-19
Posts 54 |
Dear Annie,I don't think that any1 who cares about any "extra pounds" will care about them anymore if they'd read just 1 thing of your writing. I love UR poems & they don't let me see except such a beautiful lady with a powerful way of writing.... XXOOXXOO |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Awwww how nice is that? thank you so much  I have never come across such nice people before you are all so lovely and friendly i think i will stay for a long while, Thank you so much..  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Annie, you ARE beautiful. Truly, you are. Today in our society, there has been so much emphasis put on millimetre perfection. It has been especially difficult for our young people. It breaks my heart to see what some of them do to fit the so-called ideal physical image. Apparently here, in North America, more than 50% of us are over-weight ~ Whatever the heck that means!  I know it sounds cliche to say that it is what is on the inside of a person that counts ~ not the outside. But I truly believe that! My dearest friend just had bariatric surgery yesterday. Drastic measures to lose a hundred pounds. Will I love her more when she gets all skinny? Nope! I will love her the same. In fact, I'm hoping that her sweet personality doesn't change! lol But I doubt it, she's a sweetie pie to the core ~ as you appear to be as well!  I want to wrap my arms around you and give you a great big kiss on the cheek. Yeppers, you're beautiful! Might I add, that you are one fine poetess and I am so pleased that you have found your way to our "Circle of Friends" and kindred spirits! With much love, Linda  |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you Linda, i do hope your friend is OK and tell her that someone way over in England is so jealous of her as i want that done myself she is so lucky, And i thank you for your lovely words of encouragement, your friend is very lucky to have someone like you, And i accept your (((((Hug)))))thank you  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and "Thank you" for your sweet response to my reply!  (((((((HUGS)))))))) Linda |
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Heart Shots Junior Member
since 2009-01-16
Posts 11 |
Annie, This was a wonderful poem. I have been on both sides being very thin and obese. I can tell you I was not as happy when I was thin. I wanted to look like everyone thought I should look and it caught up with me. I am 177 pounds and feel better now than I ever have before. My mother was overweight also. She passed away a few years ago and she was beautiful. I go by a persons personality. That to me defines who a person is. Their actions and words whether in a crowd of people or alone. It is sad that people have nothing better to do than to try and make others feel bad. Everyone has flaws and differences some people just look harder to try and find them to make themselves feel better about their own issues. You are a beautiful woman and a beautiful poet. Don't ever let anyone make you feel any different. You are loved for who you are not what you look like. That is what counts. Always know that. Huggs to you!! Keep your chin held high!  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Anniepimm, You don't have to be thin to help other people. Where did you ever get that idea. Love Bobby |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
I meant help people physical Bobby, as i suffer osteoarthritis and cant walk without crunches, loosing a few pounds would be better, thank you both for your very kind words of encouragement, i think you are all very thoughtful and wonderful people, and i haven't felt such beautiful energy on a forum before. Blessings to you.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Awwww thank you James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I pack too much padding, too... and have experienced cruelty for cruelty's sake because of it... and knowing you're a good person is scant comfort when you've just been a target. *S* But you know what? *S* There's hope for us... our outer packaging might change. Their lack of heart is likely to be a permanent condition. *S* Stay strong... and keep writing! *S* Your heart's an perfect '10'! *S* |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you that's sound advice |
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