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Didymus
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since 2008-05-01
Posts 33
USA

0 posted 2009-01-15 02:57 AM



       If this life were never meant to be
Content
         I might live with that reality

              Yet there is another

              

                    Again
                                            Tonight
            Discontent and that seems
                                 Unbearable
              Another night absent            

           Why are there those among
Us
              Who never seem to walk
                              Alone
           And those like me who cannot
                   Stay in step

                   Am I selfish
                      Envious
                    Am I blind
                      Blinded
                   Am I the fool

                  Why look back at
All

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-01-15 09:20 AM


Sooner or later in our lives we all might come up with such questioning, but we all are uniquely gifted and we are meant to walk at our own pace and enjoy it.

And don't look back. Be in the now.

Unbearable moments pass. Your words render the situation well.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-01-15 09:34 AM


We are not all meant to be "in step" with everyone else. A person who marches to the beautiful music of their own drum is unique, distinct, and special!

Warm hug,
EA



Didymus
Junior Member
since 2008-05-01
Posts 33
USA
3 posted 2009-01-15 12:14 PM


Thank you both.
My inexperience with PiP format is taxing.  I, like many, work off line then click and paste.  The work in Mircosoft Word did not present itself as it appeared in PiP.  Had it done so my intend may have been more clear.  I've much work to do with format here.  
D



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