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amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

0 posted 2009-01-14 11:59 AM


What will they do without you?
The beauty of your soul
When the words come in
And there is no one to tend,
No one to cherish,
The stories that they tell.

Where will my eyes go now?
When they are lonesome
For the elegant stance,
The grace of you,
That flutters a heart anew.
What will I do without you?

There's more, but it's time to go...

© Copyright 2009 kat fer - All Rights Reserved
threadbear
Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817
Indy
1 posted 2009-01-14 12:27 PM


I think you precisely pegged, Kat, how a person might feel after leaving behind friends at work.  This recently happened to me, and I still look up, wanting to share something specific with a co-worker, but they ain't thar no more.  

Life is a series of experiences, traded off for another.
Jeff

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2009-01-14 12:47 PM


What a beautiful, compassionate heart you have!  Lovely poem too!

- Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2009-01-14 04:36 PM


Dear Kat, this strings a chord in me ...

and well, I can relate also to Jeff's reply!

So beautifully rendered!

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2009-01-14 10:46 PM


You...

are an archive in the best of all times.

Thank you.


amusemi
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
5 posted 2009-01-15 08:27 AM


Thank you for your comments.  I hate what this economy is doing to some of the best, the brightest and most incredible human beings I have had the privilege of working with.  I don't know who it is worse for, the person who is forced into their new journey, or the one's remaining who mourne their loss and every day fear the same fate.
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
6 posted 2009-01-15 10:08 AM


A caring and compassionate write. These are painful times. That old saying "Here today. Gone tomorrow" sadly comes to mind.

May you never be laid off ~ and may you never lay off writing!


Linda

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2009-01-15 05:12 PM


amusemi - the economy today is a destroyer of dreams, and accomplished by the idiots running Washington. Hope this isn't too strong, but...

BC

amusemi
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
8 posted 2009-01-15 05:22 PM


Thank you Linda, you are always so kind.

Bill-with a little help from those running Corporate America (and well some abroad, too), to include those with extravagant and undeserved paychecks and bonuses, without ethics, common sense...nope, not too strong.  Don't get me started!  LOL

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
9 posted 2009-01-18 02:02 PM


You speak so well for what so many are going through at this time. Losing one's livelyhood is so emotionally jarring, I have watched my brother go through this recently.
It is especially devastating for a person in their fifties who has spent many years with the same company. Thank God, I am retired.
                          Ida

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
10 posted 2009-01-18 03:26 PM


Don't get me started either~~ as I totally agree with you~~


M

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