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Open Poetry #44
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peter griffin
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since 2008-03-06
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0 posted 2009-01-13 04:37 PM



The moment I fell,
Head first,
In love with you I,
Knew it,
Would last forever,
We talked,
About God and sky,
Your laugh,
Wide smile and joy,
Woke me,
From a deep slumber,
A dream,
What my life had been,
Had been,
The purity of your heart,
Beauty,
An antidote for weakness,
Each time,
Every time you,
Laugh, light,
Fills my head and joy,
Over,
Powers remnants of,
Past things,
Memories, shadows,
Darkness,
Deep in my mind and,
I know,
I could find you in hell.

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WTBAKELAR
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1 posted 2009-01-13 05:08 PM


Enjoyed 9/10th of the poem.  Last line lost me.  

WT.

peter griffin
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since 2008-03-06
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2 posted 2009-01-13 05:13 PM


Thank you.  The last line means something to the person who is my inspiration.
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