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HopeS
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0 posted 2009-01-13 01:17 AM





Contents Of Pages Written

Emotions make their entries
Flowing across each line
As words come tumbling out
Inner me forms into rhyme

Emotions become a mixture
A blend of highs and lows
Words penned dark and light
My inner feelings disclose

Emotions from depths within
On verses page after page
Its a journey of love and loss
All worded stage by stage

Emotions in which I express
While sharing parts of me
In contents of pages written
My feelings I bare openly

HopeĀ©2009


© Copyright 2009 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Anniepimm
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1 posted 2009-01-13 05:09 AM


Lovely poem Hope
the flow is flawless and the sentiment is so sweet,
Thank you for sharing "loved the pic as well
Set off the whole poem..

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2 posted 2009-01-13 12:01 PM


What a beautiful presentation this was!

Carpe' Diem,
Mysteria

Margherita
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3 posted 2009-01-13 12:13 PM


Yes, dear Hope, and you do it beautifully!!

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2009-01-13 06:19 PM


~ and you always express your emotions and feelings openly ~ and so beautifully!

Warm hug and a warm smile,
Linda

Ceinwyn
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5 posted 2009-01-13 06:27 PM


I'm with everybody on this one

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

Chanson
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6 posted 2009-01-13 07:11 PM


Me too! *s
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7 posted 2009-01-13 07:37 PM


nice
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