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Open Poetry #44
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jared34ricky
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since 2008-12-30
Posts 12
South Carolina, USA
0 posted 2009-01-13 12:18 PM


You reach up and grab a vine
Already knowing the name

I’m caught beneath
Repeating it again and again

I catch myself

But I won’t stop looking
At those brown eyes
Softer than the most soft of sighs

They seem to dance the dance of life

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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
1 posted 2009-01-13 05:12 AM

Awww Jared this is lovely
I loved this bit, thank you for sharing

quote:
But I won’t stop looking
At those brown eyes
Softer than the most soft of sighs

They seem to dance the dance of life
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