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Anniepimm
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0 posted 2009-01-12 01:55 PM



Lovely Autumn day

It's a lovely Autumn day
you breath in the crisp morning air
Nature is winding down from it's height
getting ready for it's winter rest,

The golden leaves fall to the ground
all the leaves turn from bright green
To burnt orange, browns, and reds
of the gentle autumn's hue,

You breath in the crisp morning air once moor
filling your lungs with the vital energy of the autumn's bite
your a child again; running through the woods
Kicking all the leaves up into the air with delight,

As the breeze picks up and blows through the wood,
it starts to rustle the leaves on the ground
You know it's time to go home
and you look towards the winter
With renewed and fresh enthusiasm,

Annie,
25-09-2008

© Copyright 2009 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2009-01-12 11:35 PM


wonderful work here Annie...   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2009-01-12 11:37 PM


Anniepimm - nice write Annie, I love those autumn days, crisp, clean, and with the leaves changing colors...

BC

Anniepimm
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3 posted 2009-01-13 03:02 AM


Thank you both..
nourzihane
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4 posted 2009-01-15 04:22 AM


thank you for this topic hope to see more

my best wishes

Nourzihane

Anniepimm
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5 posted 2009-01-15 04:44 AM


Thank you thats very nice..
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2009-01-15 10:22 AM


This read like a lovely meditation! Thanks for the respite from the hubbub of a busy day.

Awwww, I needed that!


Linda

Anniepimm
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7 posted 2009-01-15 02:13 PM


Thank you and i am glad to help...
HopeS
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8 posted 2009-01-15 10:30 PM


I always love the colours of Autumn , I could use some of that breeze right now , its summer here and so hot , its  40 celsius today


Hope

Anniepimm
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9 posted 2009-01-16 04:50 PM


Wow thats hot my mum lives in Mandura perth so i know where she is it's hot as well, send some over here please..it's freezing...


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