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Open Poetry #44

Rapture of Rupture

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-01-12 01:34 PM

Your sea ruptured
beneath the evangical
mist, running out past
the stones and the lillies
of purple confetti

the triumph of green
on the sea flavored
tributaries, where you
spread on my hollows
in the felicity of plenty

and I chose not to seek
your laurels for shelter.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-14-2009 08:17 AM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2009-01-12 05:24 PM

inkedgoddess - what can I say that I haven't said about your writings. Keep them coming...

BC

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

2 posted 2009-01-12 05:40 PM

Loving this Michelle!

“where you
spread on my hollows
in the felicity of plenty”

The title too!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2009-01-13 12:53 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-01-13 12:37 PM

Awesome, dear Michele!

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2009-01-13 07:36 PM

Goddess! A thought just crossed my mind! ~ I can only handle one at a time! lol

The blending of your's and Richy's ink would be a collaboration muy caliente!!! I'm getting the vapors with just thinking about it!

Linda

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2009-01-13 07:38 PM

enjoyed

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