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Burk28
Member

since 2009-01-08

Posts 80
Michigan USA

0 posted 2009-01-12 09:36 AM

FOUR

Old man

Old man reading book,
Never to old to grow wise,
Joyful eyes express,
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Time

The days,
Tumbling fast,
The clock racing by hour,
Time to thee I invoke please,
Free me.
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Grey Hair

Mortality Nye,
Grey hair sunshine glowing bright,
Wisdom my true friend.
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Fond Farewell

Fond farewell to youth,
Welcome now age and wisdom,
Too long in coming.
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THREE

Lamentations Cry

Lamentations cry,
For the lonely children's sigh,
Bringing peace through hope.
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Crimson Signpost

Crimson sign post read,
Hate mongers epitaph dead,
Freedom found for peace.
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Within

Beauty bound within,
The mask a refuge for her,
Safe from peering eye's.
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TWO

Souls Voice

I merely a man,
Do my best to understand,
Language in soul's voice.
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Garden gate swinging,
Looking through rain soaked windows,
Heart beats like thunder.

So sad That I cry,
For past recollections then,
Rather than rejoice.

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ONE

Illusions lie in dreams,
Enlightenment lies in the heart,
In the actions of;
In the words of,
Poets.

Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-01-12 09:43 AM

Yo Burk28,

Try them one at a time.

Bobby

Burk28
Member

since 2009-01-08

Posts 80
Michigan USA

2 posted 2009-01-12 09:45 AM

Thanks Bobby this how they were originally published, but thank you for that insight... yes you might be correct. thank you for another view of these.

Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-01-12 11:04 AM

I think this is a nice countdown, a collection of your insights that show your consciousness.

Very enjoyable.

Love,
Margherita

Burk28
Member

since 2009-01-08

Posts 80
Michigan USA

4 posted 2009-01-12 12:23 PM

Thanks very much

Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2009-01-12 07:36 PM

Nice writing...James

Burk28
Member

since 2009-01-08

Posts 80
Michigan USA

6 posted 2009-01-12 10:10 PM

Thank you james

Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self

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