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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2009-01-11 12:51 PM

Your voice

I cling
to the fading sound
of your voice
with a tenacious grip
of my perception.

I sway
to its vibrations
through the luscious forest
of my thoughts,
dwelling in
voluptuous emotions.

I inhale the purity
of this love tune,
dripping dew
on newly sprouted
morning flowers.

Your sound,
magnetic and primordial,
beckons me to relax
and fall into you
in full trust
and abandon.

Bare to the soul,
I wrap myself
into the liana
of your charm
and take a leap
onto new horizons.

And there upon
the edge of life’s
phenomenon,
your voice lingers
in ardent whispers,
inviting me
to dance along.
*

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2009-01-11 12:55 PM

quite inspiring Margherita, the material of a voice can be hated or loved and let us sharing or suspicious...I love your poem which is deeply loving someone...Thank you

yann

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

2 posted 2009-01-11 01:23 PM

I know I've said this before, but this one, is now my favorite of your's dear Marghertia.

It is amazingly beautiful, from the first word to the last.

You really wrote a wonderful piece here my dear friend!

Richy

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

3 posted 2009-01-11 01:38 PM

Dear Margherita, to hear such sounds my friend, how wonderful as your words, thank you for sharing, enjoyed.

Rick

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2009-01-11 01:46 PM

I agree with Richy, this is a most beautiful poem and one of my favorites now.

M

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2009-01-11 02:54 PM

MAGA Margherita, this is MUY bonita.

Your poetry is so lyrical, spiritual, 'cosmical', mystical ~ and downright magical!!!

You know I lovesya ~ and your sublime poetry!!!

Angelo Terrestre

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2009-01-11 07:24 PM

Margherita - your poem flows like magic, and with the graphic it is magic. Very nice...

BC

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2009-01-11 09:17 PM

Margherita

Beautiful moving work!
Such an enjoyable read!

Eric

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2009-01-11 09:38 PM

You words fly as your heart sings of joy

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

9 posted 2009-01-11 10:38 PM

Magical enchanting feelings expressed

Hope

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

10 posted 2009-01-11 10:40 PM

it is alluring how the sound of a voice can evoke such thoughts...this phrase was an excellent description of that phenomenon:

"And there upon
the edge of life’s
phenomenon,
your voice lingers
in ardent whispers,
inviting me
to dance along"

...an excellent write...much enjoyed

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2009-01-12 05:59 AM

ms mar..your pen voice is lovely here...speaking love sounds

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

12 posted 2009-01-12 06:29 AM

wonderful, just wonderful dear Margherita xxx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

13 posted 2009-01-12 09:13 AM

Yo dear Margherita,

The words are all there in this poem. However, my old eyes had trouble reading them. They all rather faded into the background.

Love Bobby

Burk28
Member

since 2009-01-08

Posts 80
Michigan USA

14 posted 2009-01-12 09:37 AM

beautiful poetry here such a silken flow,

Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

15 posted 2009-01-12 11:25 AM

Very, very beautiful, Margherita.

Owl

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2009-01-12 07:25 PM

Fine writing...James

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

17 posted 2009-01-12 08:59 PM

Margherita, this is an absolutely beautiful poem.

nourzihane
Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

18 posted 2009-01-13 04:25 AM

Margherita how beautiful your poem
i like what you write thank you my dear friend.

my kisses
Nourzihane

threadbear
Senior Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 817
Indy

19 posted 2009-01-13 05:26 AM

Most charming, Margherita!
With an eye
upon the horizon . . .

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

20 posted 2009-01-14 05:44 AM

What a joy, so many kind and loving replies! Thank you all, my Poet friends!
Have a beautiful, creative day!
Love,
Margherita

shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

21 posted 2009-01-14 11:59 AM

Beautiful work Dear Margherita. Your voice lingers within me.
Love,
Hal

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

22 posted 2009-01-15 03:42 AM

Stunning write. So full of hope and love.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

23 posted 2009-01-15 10:08 AM

some voices just do that....

enjoyed!

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