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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2009-01-10 01:49 PM


In Silhouette

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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2009-01-10 02:19 PM


fine layering of poetic over photographic imagery.

I am most fond of the ending to this 'penning'!

applause!!

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2009-01-10 02:30 PM


Yo Bill,

You're good at these presentations.  Keep up the good work.

Bobby

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2009-01-10 06:53 PM


Just lovely, Bill~~ I am enjoying your backgrounds, too!


M

Margherita
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4 posted 2009-01-10 08:18 PM


Dear romantic Bill, you play the tune so well also with your beautiful poetic words!

Great atmosphere!

Love,
Margherita

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2009-01-10 10:34 PM


secondhanddreampoet - thanks for the kind words about this writing. It does take a lot of time to do the photo with writing over it, but I enjoy doing it.

Bobby - as above, it sure does take a lot of work to do this, but I enjoy it. Somehow the photo makes the words more meaningful...

Maureen - good to see you, and always your kind words...

Margherita - love that guitar and the sounds it makes. Thank you for coming by and reading this write, and for your gracious comments...

BC


Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2009-01-11 12:13 PM


oh..those last two lines...

A poem of pure beauty.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Richy
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7 posted 2009-01-11 12:17 PM



Dear Bill I think this is my favorite of your's. I wish I wrote it myself.

You are a loving soul dear friend.
Richy

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2009-01-11 07:45 AM


I enjoyed the softness and the intensity of the melody
Oklahoma Rose
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9 posted 2009-01-11 09:10 AM


Very beautiful and romantic, Bill. You are a true romantic.
Earth Angel
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10 posted 2009-01-11 09:22 AM


Hmmm, I enjoy playing a guitar, but this may be the first time that I have ever wanted to be one!


Linda

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11 posted 2009-01-11 10:10 AM


Bill...Wonderfully tender write. Enjoyed.
One day if you are willing I sure would like to get you to show me how to do the writting on a photo thing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Bill Charles
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12 posted 2009-01-11 05:35 PM


Susan - I'm glad you liked this writing. Thank you for stopping by, and for the comments...

Richy - when I read your comments I felt warm inside with what you had to say. Thank you so much...

inkedgoddess - Your words are always special, thank you...

Oklahoma Rose - I'm glad you came by to read this writing, and that you wrote what you did...

Linda - your words are very gracious, h'mmmm, now if you could change into my guitar...

Paul - dear friend, nice to see you again. Yes, I would love to share with you the technique of writing on graphics. Are you on MSN? If so, try 'donnally22@hotmail.com'.

Ariana
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13 posted 2009-01-11 09:05 PM


Bill
Beautiful and sensual job with the graphics and words.  I have heard you play -you can make the guitar cry with moody blues or rock with the best of them.  Keep up the great graphics.

Ariana

ethome
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14 posted 2009-01-11 09:19 PM


Hey Bill!

There you go, you got the old guitar out and you went romantic.....The words and the picture fit together so beautifully.

Eric

steavenr
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15 posted 2009-01-11 10:28 PM


I couldn't get my browser to copy it, but I loved the phrase 'fingers bewitched to a softer magic'...it was all lovely, but that really caught my attention...excellent write
Sharon Rose
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16 posted 2009-01-12 02:24 PM


Bill,
     I enjoy reading your poetry and as always each one out does the last.

Bill Charles
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17 posted 2009-01-12 05:14 PM


Ariana - glad you stopped by to read this writing. Ah yes, I remember when I once cried with the guitar while I played. Good memories then, many good times, it was good...

ethome - Yes, got that guitar out once again and somehow wrote some words at the same time. Thanks for the comments...

steavenr - thank you for the reply to this writing. At times the words come out from where I'm not sure, and they seem to come together once in a while...

Sharon Rose - thank you my dear for your always gracious words. See ya soon if all goes well..

BC

threadbear
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18 posted 2009-01-13 05:22 AM


flowing notes are like
floating love clouds
that come from your pen
when the ink boils
and must write.

Jeff

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