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Darker Season
Junior Member
since 2004-04-01
Posts 48
Wisconsin

0 posted 2009-01-10 12:50 PM


When chasing sparks you're bound to learn;
Sometimes you melt, sometimes you burn
But in the end
In the glow
Maybe then you'll know...

Life is just a mystery
And some things are just meant to be
Miracles.
Let them show.
Maybe then you'll know...

Some how. Some way. Some day
I'm going to crawl into your heart and stay
And never leave.
Never go.
Darling, don't you know?

By Andrew J*M



© Copyright 2009 Andrew J*M - All Rights Reserved
SlowlyFallAway
Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279
North Carolina
1 posted 2009-01-10 08:47 PM


I see you only have this one post, but I read it and I look forward to reading more. I like the style, I think that's one thing we have in common. Keep posting these, I'm interested to read more.
Burk28
Member
since 2009-01-08
Posts 80
Michigan USA
2 posted 2009-01-10 11:07 PM


Yes, a wonderful rythym found within these lines, excellent

Peace of  mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
3 posted 2009-01-11 12:06 PM


I liked this a lot...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Nikki Thorman
New Member
since 2009-01-08
Posts 7
South Australia
4 posted 2009-01-11 05:31 AM


I love this poem it's follows very well and is very well written. Take care xx
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