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My First Love
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My First Love |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England 
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My First Love We met when we were just five years old We acted as if we were one not two Those little ankle socks and school shoes Looked better on me than on you, I’d sit next to you in the classroom And you would help me with my maths We’d share our sweets and apples And hold hands after the class, I always wanted to kiss you But i didn't quite know how I really wanted to marry you But that is imposable now, Your mum and dad wouldn't talk to me And time started to pass us by right then All the birthdays we have missed But you wasn't there to celebrate them, We used to make little pictures The house we would have crayoned on the front My last memory of you was not a happy one When you smiled, ran away, and were gone, I have reached the age of twenty five And you would of been twenty six You still would of been with me now Had you not crossed the road when you did, In my heart you’re still alive today I will never forget when we were eight The age you were taken from me The day you ran out of the gate, I stare at the road in floods of tears Like a pilgrim each year on that fateful day I hold every car that passes by to blame For taking my Best friend a way, Annie, 14-09-2008 |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
I always wanted to kiss you But i didn't quite know how I really wanted to marry you But that is imposable now, ******************** I alwayes wanted to fall in love but when i fell in love i feel that i'm in paradis really i'm very happy. How beautiful to live the moment of happiness. some one said We love because it's the only true adventure. love makes you very nice ...sweet and happy i think that enough to live Annie you are really wonderful thank you my dear friend wish you the best love Nourziha |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Annie.. this is close to home for me... I was 16yrs when I lost my first love from a car accident... it's very hard isn't it... I still grieve for him after all this time.. you have written from your heart and your heart speaks volumes of your love for him... I am sending some of my special RDB  to comfort you.thank you for sharing this with us ... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Nikki Thorman New Member
since 2009-01-08
Posts 7South Australia |
awwww wow i love this poem it's beautiful good work |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you Everyone for your lovely comments  |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you Everyone for your lovely comments |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Annie, the beginning is delightful but the ending very sad, Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem... yann |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Loving memories last forever , this was so touching and heartfelt , Hope |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Annie this is a very moving and heartfelt work.....Shows the writer's fine character which you are always expressing in your works. Eric |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Awww thank you Eric...  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Tears and hugs Owl |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you Owl  |
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