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Anniepimm
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0 posted 2009-01-10 12:32 PM



A Prayer

A prayer to satisfy my hunger
A hunger that started with pain
A sonnet, a whisper, a glancing star
Just to smell your essence again,

If i could hold you for just one moment
One moment a fraction of precious time
I could live in that moment forever
Just to know that you are mine,

I am standing on the outside
You do not even see me but brush me aside
If only you knew of the heartache i feel
The emptiness that is deep inside,

Beautiful lady of lament My life loving you has been well spent
As i hold out my hand and take hold of yours
Show me that you love me
Please just open the door,

My beautiful lady has gone now
And the sorrow she left is done
What on earth will i do without her
My precious darling Mum...

Annie.

© Copyright 2009 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2009-01-10 08:30 PM


This is very touching and beautiful, dear Annie. And I can relate ... Mums, oh Mums!

Love,
Margherita

Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
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England
2 posted 2009-01-11 03:57 AM


Thank you Margherita Mums are always a worry
nourzihane
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since 2008-07-10
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Algeria
3 posted 2009-01-11 04:25 AM


thank you Annie we hope more and the best
I really enjoyed

Accept my pass

love
Nourzihane

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2009-01-11 05:18 AM


beautiful dear Annie.. just beautiful.. we seem to be on a parallel of loss here.. my mom was so very precious too...   to you dear poet   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Anniepimm
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5 posted 2009-01-11 07:22 AM


Awww thank you Lovely people..   
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