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Inspired-8
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Pluto

0 posted 2009-01-10 06:33 AM



Captures the splendor

The colors portray

Beauty of no equal measure

Gifted each day



Blazes across the skies

Reflected on waters below

Magnificence denies

Any lesser to know



Elegant demeanor

As she dips and fades

From whence pristines her

Till rise of next day...


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c2009 vduna

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Burk28
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since 2009-01-08
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1 posted 2009-01-10 11:15 PM


This struck me as a wonderful piece of poetry.I look forward to reading more of your work

Peace of  mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2009-01-11 02:04 AM


great to read you again Victor.. Happy New Year my friend... excellent imagery RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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3 posted 2009-01-11 01:50 PM


Enjoy your writing, Victor.
                       Ida

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2009-01-11 03:53 PM


Wonderful, dear Vic. Your heart sees beauty, the healing has begun.

Love,
Margherita

Inspired-8
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5 posted 2009-01-11 10:44 PM


thank you so much for reading Burk Roniece Ida and Marg happy new year to you all!

vic

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