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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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"I didn't talk to your handsome face, because I was under academic pressure" she said. "Pressure is for whistling tea kettles, and hydraulic car jacks" I said. "I like the way you think" she said. ______________________________ So this is what it's like to laughsmilecrydie. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
A nice witty snapshot. Ever thought of trying your hand at Provencal poetry? I'd love to see that  Mark |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
You know, honestly, I have no idea what that is... I shall look it up, and we shall see what I think about it. Thanks for the read, Marc. -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Paul, Your idea of pressure is correct. Bobby |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thanks bobo. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Dang that's good -- I wish I'd written it. It makes me think of some things I DID write, back in the day..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I appreciate the kind words, sir. I wish it were as good as you think it is! -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Pressure seems ever present in our days and your ways brought a smile. Very cute. Love, Margherita |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I like the way you think too Hope |
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chopsticks Senior Member
since 2007-10-02
Posts 888The US, |
I like it, and like Pascal said, pressure is at right angles and un-dimensioning . |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Mar-guh-reetski... Thank you, mademoiselle. Always a pleasure! Hope... Thanks. =] Chopsticks... Thanks man, always nice to have you read and give me your thoughts! -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
PW "Pressure is for whistling tea kettles, and hydraulic car jacks" I said."  EA  |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
=] Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yep, for those things amoung other things. Imagine! putting academics before a handsome face.........Just c'mon and get a hold on this! See how ya like that, little ms mathmatics! I like how you made her think. Eric |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Haha, thanks! Her world was rocked, but only for a split second.  Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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