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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-01-09 10:58 AM



I like it like this
when I star
as weathergirl

I can blink and make rain

inject my own intonations

thrashing your rooftops
dousing your fences
while you crawl
past my floodgates

For these men
without parasol

I've not sprinkled
confection

as i've worn you
redundantly
in pink drizzle
of heart roses

but today's precipation

will thunder
your insides.

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2009-01-09 11:10 AM


Oh, Goddess, what a 'rock your world' closing!

"but today's precipation

will thunder
your insides."

Loved it!

Linda

Paul Wilson
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2 posted 2009-01-09 01:23 PM


inked...Sounds like you are telling someone to kiss off and get lost. Maybe I'm wrong, but I still enjoyed very much...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2009-01-09 03:00 PM


LovelyInkhyOne~
Wisdom in your ink ... and strong too~

Your new photo is LOVELY~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
4 posted 2009-01-09 03:07 PM


I am in a drought.  



Very nice work here Inked one!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
5 posted 2009-01-09 03:32 PM


awesome inkprincess
Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
6 posted 2009-01-09 04:39 PM


Be kind my friend, we may drift away not to be found again, enjoyed.
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
7 posted 2009-01-11 01:21 PM


To drown in a woman's rain, is to drink an ocean of ecstacy!  Loved this!
Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

8 posted 2009-01-11 01:29 PM



If I had to drown,
it would be,
just like this.


Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
9 posted 2009-01-11 04:50 PM


You are a true power woman and poetess, Goddess!

Love and smiles.
Margherita

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