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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
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England

0 posted 2009-01-09 08:50 AM



Lonely Is The Love

When the world seems to be so unfair
and you are lost for so many words to say
when it seems as though nobody really cares
and the people you know just turn away,

Somehow you find yourself standing
in a pool of your own sorrowed tears
lost for words as you stroll past the sea
you cry out, but nobody ever hears,

You take a look around as you gaze over the sea
and you write the words that were left unspoken
you write your thoughts deep in the sand
from your heart-prints that have been Broken,

The one true love whom you needed the most
longing for the embrace of somebody dear
when you want all the pain to come to an end
the waves whisper love for you to hear,

So i wrote all my words in the sand
all the love in my heart; i wrote for you
until the waves claimed my many thoughts
as i gazed out at the ocean so blue.

Annie
18-11-2008

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Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2009-01-09 10:32 AM


Now I want to go sit on the beach and contemplate....

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
2 posted 2009-01-09 10:48 AM


Perfect now my job is done....

Thank you..

Paul Wilson
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3 posted 2009-01-09 01:27 PM


Annie...Enjoyed this very sad love poem, I hope all is well. Sometime we have to write the hurt to let our hearts heal...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
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4 posted 2009-01-09 01:50 PM


Very Nice heart on your sleeve write.

Enjoyed!

Rich

Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
5 posted 2009-01-10 04:05 AM


Thank you all very much
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