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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England

0 posted 2009-01-09 07:49 AM


Hi this is a light harted look at the net,
Sorry if it upsets anyone


Are You Surfing Tonight.

Are you surfing tonight?
Will you email me tonight?
Are you sorry we drifted apart?

Dose your computer memory stray?
To that bright summer’s day
When I PM,'d you,
And called you sweetheart,

Dose the chair next to your computer
Seem empty and bare
Do you gaze at you monitor
And picture me there,

Is your heart filled with pain?
Shall I text him again?
Tell me dear, are you surfing to night?

I wonder if your chatting tonight
They say the worlds a stage
The chart room is were we met,

You chatted with me so freely
And never missed a queue
Then your emails started to change
You acted strange, and why i never knew,

Honey! you lied when you said you loved me
I had no reason to doubt you
But id rather go on reading your lies
Than go one MSN without you,

Now my screen is bare
And am sitting here
"With" your blocked all around,

And if you won’t come and chat to me
Then they can close the chat room down,

Do you think me insane?
I'll never PM him again,
Tell me dear are you surfing tonight?

Annie

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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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1 posted 2009-01-09 08:21 AM


LOL I can relate to this ,12 years on the computer , this brings back so many memories


Hope

Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
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England
2 posted 2009-01-09 08:24 AM


Just some computer fun
Thank you Hope

nourzihane
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since 2008-07-10
Posts 254
Algeria
3 posted 2009-01-09 01:53 PM


Annie you have a spicial writting
you are really creativitor
thank you my dear

love..hug
Nourzihane

Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
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England
4 posted 2009-01-10 04:04 AM


Thank you
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2009-01-12 07:19 PM


A nice revision of Are you lonely tonite...James
Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
6 posted 2009-01-12 07:24 PM


i know i did it in one of my mad moods..
Thank you James..

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