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Open Poetry #44

berry me deep

Nikki Thorman
New Member

since 2009-01-08

Posts 7
South Australia

0 posted 2009-01-09 01:26 AM

             BERRY ME DEEP
  How come you don't want me any more.
  How come you don't even want to talk to me.
  Three years how could you just leave that.
  I've heard that you've been acting shifty.
  We were practiclly family.
  You said I have pure hateread in my eyes.
  You said that I'v sold my sole.
  We'll see when you berry me.
  I'll lift myself from my woonds deep below and
  raise that anger that hides deep with in.
  You've been tearing me down.
  You have no idea what you have gotten yourself
  into.
  The gun shot holds cries, and frees my mind.
  Saving it from the fog.
  Saving it from my thoughts.
  ---Flash---
  Lifting myself.....bring me home.
  ---Flash---
  Our spirts will be one again.
  ---flash---
  Bringing me to the end of my trail.
  ---Flash---
  Berry me alone.
  Bring me home.

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

1 posted 2009-01-09 06:26 AM

Thoughtful poem..
Beautifully written i was drawn into this piece and it set my mind off with so many thoughts

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2009-01-11 10:56 PM

Welcome to PiP. I hope that you enjoy it here too. It's been a place that I have found a lot of enjoyment.

Did you mean "bury" instead of "berry"?

Alison

Nikki Thorman
New Member

since 2009-01-08

Posts 7
South Australia

3 posted 2009-01-18 01:14 AM

hahaha yes alison i did spelling has never been my thing lol

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