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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2009-01-08 11:03 PM



fingers soar like eagles
against your skin
I chase the moon across your eyes
my eyes racing to catch your smile
upon your lips
my heart jumps when your arms
find their home around my waist
I can't say that I love you, but
I can say that I'm willing to wait
to see what God has in store
for our rebellious hearts
I promise my dreams
won't jump to conclusions
and I promise not to be someone that I'm not
just as long as you promise
to continue to have patience
while I fall in love

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

© Copyright 2009 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
1 posted 2009-01-08 11:10 PM


Oh man, I came in to post my poem and here you are!  My poem can wait because I am in love with yours.  So, you come first.  It's good to see you posting again - and I love the tone of this poem.

Hugs and all that mushy stuff,
Alison

ethome
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2 posted 2009-01-09 12:19 PM


I like how this starts out and then takes a unique twist.

Love the conclusion......Made me smile.

Eric

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-01-09 10:07 AM


Kristen! Tink, you're in the pink! ~ A lover-ly shade of pastel pink. ~ So soft, so gentle, so go-with-the-flow loveliness.

Ah, yes! Falling in love looks good on you!

It's a joy to see you so happy! You deserve it!!!

Love,
Linda


Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2009-01-10 01:41 PM


Ceinwyn - liked this writing a lot, as it has much meaning...

BC

Margherita
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5 posted 2009-01-11 03:56 PM


A jumping heart is most certainly a well promising start!

Very lovely.

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2009-01-12 11:38 PM


Kristen... your words are oh so lovely!! just like you my friend   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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