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viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-01-08 09:05 PM




I'm willing to bet
I could make love to you
from the inside out
of the important parts

You give me a chance
and I'm willing to bet
the axis of your world
would take a violent shake

Exhale your orgasm-noise
where it belongs..
in my pillow.
Because we can't
have you friends hearing,
now can we?

open the door,
and we can leave
one at a time
five minutes apart.
Because we can't
have your beautiful friends
knowing that you had
the time of your life in there,
now can we?


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So this is what it's like to laughsmilecrydie.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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1 posted 2009-01-08 09:19 PM


What woman wouldn't want her world rocked like that?!? ~ Even for a third of that time! lol

This one packed a punch to my sacral chakra!


Linda

viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
2 posted 2009-01-08 09:35 PM


Thank you, dearest Earth Angel. I'm glad you received it so well!

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

ethome
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3 posted 2009-01-09 12:12 PM


I know what you mean.....The heck with the friends!

Eric

amusemi
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4 posted 2009-01-09 12:51 PM


I don't know...LOL...maybe she's got it right.  If you can "rock her world" like that maybe you need to be a secret...   Loved the poem!!!
viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
5 posted 2009-01-09 01:29 AM


Ethome- Yeah, who needs 'em? As long as they're not your own, they're  worthless! Haha. Thanks for the read, chappo.

Amusemi- This could be true. I believe it's to save embarrassment, of participating in any acts with me... But that's a good self-esteem boosting option, hehe.. Thanks for reading, always a pleasure to hear from you

-P

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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6 posted 2009-01-10 02:22 AM


Ah heck, why can't we?  Sheese, so many things to think that can't be done.

Seriously, I like this one a lot.

A

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
7 posted 2009-01-10 09:23 AM


Thanks Alison! Maybe I'll move to Alaska

-Paul

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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