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LoneWolf
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0 posted 2009-01-08 02:37 PM



“Forever”
These guilty daggers
Pierce my dying heart
Contorting my perceptions
Of this world

Send me spiraling
Into the nightmarish realm
Of my shattered mind

To wander forever onward
Forever alone
Forever guilty
For the things I’ve done
(That I thought were right)

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.

© Copyright 2009 Colin Heffernan - All Rights Reserved
Burk28
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since 2009-01-08
Posts 80
Michigan USA
1 posted 2009-01-08 02:41 PM


Mistakes are the stuff of growth and the gleaning of wisdom, this is a well written piece of work, thank you for sharing it.
bravo

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2009-01-08 03:00 PM


Lots of passion in your words.
We all make mistakes in life but some are more reconcilable than others......Powerful personal write!

Eric

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