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viking_metal
Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-01-08 02:44 AM


like an echo
in my brain,

you haunt me
without mercy.

I want to take
you in my palm:

liquify.
modify.
simplify.

and inject you
into the sun.

________________________________
So this is what it's like to laughsmilecrydie.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

[This message has been edited by viking_metal (01-08-2009 09:40 AM).]

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2009-01-08 03:08 AM


Well PW that's gonna be one hell of a slider!

You should try out for the Dodgers.

Yep, the hurt can be that real and if it hangs on too long quite annoying...

Eric

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-01-08 06:53 AM


Now why hadn't I ever thought of doing that?
I bet it would work! ~ I hope it does for you!

Hugs 'n lots of sun Light,
Linda



viking_metal
Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
3 posted 2009-01-08 09:39 AM


ethome- Hehe....

Earth Angel- I know, right?

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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