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Anniepimm
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0 posted 2009-01-07 07:59 AM



Having Your Cake And Eating It

My body and soul I gave to you
my vow to stay faithful to the end
I agreed to honor and obey you
but you left me for my best friend,

Didn't I do enough of the house work
give you three beautiful kids
was I not there for everything you asked of me
but you betrayed me for a sordid kiss

You told me you couldn't be without her
and she was the love of your life
I remember you saying that to me once
that's how I ended up your wife,

You said you wanted to divorce me,
with that I have no hesitation at all
But she has gone back to her husband
"and now I" am having a ball,


Annie
11-8-2008

© Copyright 2009 Annie - All Rights Reserved
amusemi
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1 posted 2009-01-07 08:32 AM


Good for you!!!  I loved this.  Annie you're one in a million!
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2 posted 2009-01-07 09:32 AM


Smiling at your cake treat.
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2009-01-07 10:01 AM


Annie~
I'll have a slice of that !!!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Anniepimm
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4 posted 2009-01-07 10:14 AM


Thanks every one i am so glad you liked the poem..

  

Lucie
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5 posted 2009-01-07 11:55 AM


I just love Sweet Justice!!!
I loved this!

Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all.


nourzihane
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6 posted 2009-01-07 12:01 PM


Dear Annie

beautiful written we hope more
thank you and good day

Love
Nourzihane

Anniepimm
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7 posted 2009-01-07 12:15 PM


Thank you Lucie
And Nourzihane

  

Marchmadness
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8 posted 2009-01-07 01:58 PM


Now, isn't that so much better than whinning? He'll be trying to crawl back home soon. Don't let him have any cake. ha ha.
                               Ida

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9 posted 2009-01-07 03:59 PM


Annie...Good for you. Like the old song " These Boots Are Made for Walking" and their gonna walk all over you. Nancy Sinatra cira 1960's ...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Anniepimm
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10 posted 2009-01-07 05:07 PM


Ha! Ha! sadly i can remember that song coming out, And thank you for you feed back..

  

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