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gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
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0 posted 2009-01-06 09:26 PM



Is there one heart?
The one thing you live by
I can’t see how people live this way
Its love for the girl you want someday
What about the passion you feel for the blue sky
Or the logs in the fire by your side

Is that really all?
Successes is in the heart
What if it’s torn out by the girl you most want?
The dream you had is gone
The deepening hole you made
Now you can’t climb out that way

She ain’t coming back
I’m stuck with a fee
That’s unplayable
The job I as left with
For the rest of time

It’s nothing to laugh at
I had nothing to give up more than that
I saw her one last time today
With her boyfriend Mac
God listen to my blessing
I don’t want to ask for too much
Let me have her to hold on to
Am I asking too much?
I will shout out
Even if I lose this love game

I heard her say
“Maybe some day ill marry him”
I hope it’s a cruel joke she playin
Cause it feels like hell
I just want to go home

There are two of you
That keeps me dragging through
I’m not sure if its you

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Nikki Thorman
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since 2009-01-08
Posts 7
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1 posted 2009-01-09 01:32 AM


gdcod2player, I love your poem it hits close to home for me. And it think it's very well written take care xx
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