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howardtsu
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0 posted 2009-01-06 06:57 PM




howard :

                        so, will you accompany me on the cruise?

                        Eve was amused, but confused at Howard's attempts to schmooze

                                            without his muse

                        he couldn't have heard the news

                        that each of them felt the bruise

                        of knowing some other pair of shoes

                        was more than willing to cruise into the other person's life

                        or that she had refused to become somebody else's wife

                        the truth of the matter was that she liked his booze

eve :

                        Santa Cruz you say?

howard :

                        uh .... huh?

eve :

                        here,

                        have a Baby Ruth?

howard :

                        sure

                        thanks Eve

                        so will you go with me?

eve :

                        i'll think about it

                        who was she kidding?

                        she wasn't about to lose him

                                                               again



                                                                                                  

                                                                                                                       love,

                                                                                                                       eve & howard



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Burk28
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since 2009-01-08
Posts 80
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1 posted 2009-01-08 04:16 PM


quite a clever piece of writing here, I enjoyed this

Peace of  mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2009-01-08 04:31 PM


Made me smile.
Light and easy mind games not meant to hurt but the playful type.

Enjoyed

Eric

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2009-01-08 07:27 PM


oh Howard... love this!!! Happy New Year to you and Eve RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2009-01-08 09:23 PM


...and Howard's and Eve's love story, continues!
Thanks for this installment, Howard! It's been a long time in coming, but it was a treat to read!

Ships ahoy! Happy sailing!

EA

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