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marc3696
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0 posted 2009-01-06 01:49 PM







The black armored knight.
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On a cold dark night
he will watch.
The man who cannot talk.
The man who cant be seen.
Our guardian,our watcher.
In the corner of a room
is where he will sit


For he is one of the very few.
The men in shining armour.
Destroying the spirits,
who come to haunt us
and the monster under our beds.
With no thanks or no please
he has to stand strong.
Taking what the earth
throws upon.


He is what helps us when
we are alone.
He is the unknown voice
in our heads.
The one that makes us brave.
The one that makes us strong.
The person that can never be known.
He is our protecter,
our watcher.
For he is our black armored knight.
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Sorry for grammer.
Please comment and leave tips.
Im not quite done yet im still fixing.  
pic isnt mine found it on images.



[This message has been edited by marc3696 (01-06-2009 02:26 PM).]

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marc3696
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1 posted 2009-01-06 03:50 PM


sorry to double post but
just to make sure this picture is not min i found it on Google and it just happened to fit my poem lol.

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2009-01-06 05:37 PM


Nice...James
steavenr
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3 posted 2009-01-06 05:48 PM


this is excellent...made me slow down and read it slowly (a good thing)...strong enough to withstand a careful reading...good work...very good
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Gaia
4 posted 2009-01-06 08:49 PM


Thank you for sharing your Black Knight, for the world is greatly in need of such protectors.
Welcome to Pips.

marc3696
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5 posted 2009-01-07 04:25 PM


Thank you for all the nice comments
They really help me with my poetry it helps me know what style to write.

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